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Friday 7 September 2012

My speech

We have been learning to write and present our speeches. We had to persuade the audience to think our way. The Olympics was our theme.
The criteria we had to use to write and present our speech included, an introduction, delivery, content and our conclusion.
I have learnt to use powerful words in my introduction and also today I have learnt to write interesting writing.

I think that I didn't do well In my speech because I did not put enough information into my introduction. For example I think that I should have used more powerful words and more humour.

I think that my delivery could have been better because my volume was not loud enough and I did not pronunciate my words correctly and I also didn't look comfortable and confident when I stood in front of the class.

I think that I had a good content because I captured the audience's attention. I also used good expressions in my speech and I included my own ideas but I only had one thing that was wrong in my speech I never included facts to support my opinion.

I think that I did very good in my speech and next time I will try to speak louder in speech and I need to try to put more confident into it.I hope next time I will make it to the finally and then win a price.
  
     
  

Healthy sandwiches

                                       Healthy Sandwiches

Hello everyone my name is AnaMalia and today I am so happy because Glen Innes school had free lunch from Glen Innes  Pak'n'Save, wow! isn't that awesome.

I think that everyone should eat healthy food because, it is good for their body and they should buy it from Glen Innes Pak'n'Save. I think that the sandwich that I made today was yummy and tasty.

I think that Mr. Naidoo did a great work by providing the food for us and we all enjoyed making our own sandwich, it was fantastic.    I have reasons why healthy food is good for your health

1.It is good for your body and it gives you more energy.
2.It is very good for people's health and good for their brains. 

Mr.Hendricks did a little prayer for everyone then we dug in and made our own lovely sandwiches. It was so delicious. We all had to sit at tables and the people that were at my table was Sameera, Chloe,  Auarirki, Celia, Talia, Longa, Auytmn and last but not least me. Then Sameera  named her sandwich Mr.Delicious that was a boring "wow!" I said. Auariki  named her lovely sandwich Mrs. Vegetable that was a little yucky but not offensive and then it was my turn to name my sandwich. I called mine Mr.Bean the big head, I bet my one was the best out of all the table.


Lastly I think that I had the best day for  long time and  I would like to thank you Mr.Naidoo for making my day wonderful and fantastic and I also know that everyone and the teachers, and Mr.Hendricks had an awesome day. 


Tuesday 21 August 2012

The Most Memorable Moment


Bing-The most memorable moment in the ceremony was when I saw all of the people that went to support us at London.It was so cool when I saw the flame go on and on.

Bang-It was a great memory when the two twins won the first gold medal for rowers.It was so special to see the twins standing with the gold
medal on the  stage I was so proud and happy.

Bong- It is surprising because New Zealand won three gold in the olympics.I was so excited that Valarie Adams got a silver medal for shot put. Valerie Adams tried her best to get a gold medal for shot put.

Inclusion-It was cool when the flame went on and I was so proud and happy I was also excited that Valerie Adams got a silver medal. Right now New Zealand's rank is 15 so click here to see the tally chart and where are we leading. www.london2012.com
It was so cool when I saw the flame go on and on.


Sunday 22 July 2012

Anamaria, Anamalia. I think this is an awesome way for us to all share our learning. Just imagine you going to Australia or even back to the Islands and to still be able to work with your class friends every day. That is what applications such as this will do for us. What do you think about that?